NaNoWriMo Daily Inspiration: Fishing for Info
November 15th 2010 08:51
You know these chain emails that promise you luck/money/the love of your life if you send them on to so and so many of your friends? I just go one of those. The dialog won't win awards, but it's a tolerable example of someone fishing for information:
Girl: What's wrong
Boy: I like her so much...
Girl: Talk to her!
Boy: I don't know. She won't ever like me.
Girl: Don't say that. You're amazing.
Boy: I just want her to know how I feel.
Girl: Then tell her.
Boy: She won't like me...
Girl: How do you know that?
Boy: I can just tell.
Girl: Well just tell her.
Boy: What should I say?
Girl: Tell her how much you like her!
Boy: I tell her that daily.
Girl: What do you mean?
Boy: I'm always with her. I love her.
Girl: I know how you feel. I have the same problem... But he'll never like me...
Boy: Wait. Who do you like?
Girl: Oh some boy.
Boy: Oh... she won't like me either.
Girl: She does.
Boy: How do you know..?
Girl: Because, who wouldn't like you?
Boy: You.
Girl: You're wrong, I love you.
Boy: I love you too.
Girl: So are you going to talk to her?
Boy: I just did.
I will not tell you send this on to at least 10 other people unless you want to have an unhappy love life. I'm telling you to write a scene where one character plays dumb, pretends to be sad or says something he/she knows to be wrong in order to make another character reveal some important information.
Girl: What's wrong
Boy: I like her so much...
Girl: Talk to her!
Boy: I don't know. She won't ever like me.
Girl: Don't say that. You're amazing.
Boy: I just want her to know how I feel.
Girl: Then tell her.
Boy: She won't like me...
Girl: How do you know that?
Boy: I can just tell.
Girl: Well just tell her.
Boy: What should I say?
Girl: Tell her how much you like her!
Boy: I tell her that daily.
Girl: What do you mean?
Boy: I'm always with her. I love her.
Girl: I know how you feel. I have the same problem... But he'll never like me...
Boy: Wait. Who do you like?
Girl: Oh some boy.
Boy: Oh... she won't like me either.
Girl: She does.
Boy: How do you know..?
Girl: Because, who wouldn't like you?
Boy: You.
Girl: You're wrong, I love you.
Boy: I love you too.
Girl: So are you going to talk to her?
Boy: I just did.
I will not tell you send this on to at least 10 other people unless you want to have an unhappy love life. I'm telling you to write a scene where one character plays dumb, pretends to be sad or says something he/she knows to be wrong in order to make another character reveal some important information.
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